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T. D. Wolf's avatar

Interesting scene, with a bit of mystery.

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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Yay, you did it. You broke from the numbered smiles, and it reads so much smoother.

Good job on the conversation with Jasin. Nothing in this entry pulled me from the story.

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