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Now, here we go. The flow is wonderful, the dialogue excellent, and the observations spot on. I like the comradery that the Tolly and Jasin show.

Why would they think that Glorinda had sustaining magic? That adds to the mystery.

Would the villain have given her something to keep her alive when she doesn't eat?

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