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>>But I had nothing to do. I was useless. Worse than useless.

Ummm, why? Is she so incompetent she can't be helpful?

It would be really nice if more happened here.

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>>My boss would never forgive me for my betrayal.

This seems like a real climb down from the tension promised in the beginning of the story. There I got an impression of an almost omnipotent evil character eager to torture her to death. Now it almost seems as if she is merely upset because he 'wouldn't forgive her'... like one might be with a friend.

Weeks going by with nothing from the bad guy seems excessive. Full disclosure, I haven't been following along much, but what happened to him?

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