The next morning
>>I've been through worse, I didn't say.
I think 'I didn't say' is redundant, and would be more powerful without.
I love this quote:
>>Somehow, I thought that Tolly was no stranger to the technique of lying by telling the strict, literal truth.
Mine was "I considered what 'collapsing in a heap' would look like in the seduction dress, and shuddered."
I suppose it's hard to be seductive when you can't walk straight and collapse to the floor.
>>I've been through worse, I didn't say.
I think 'I didn't say' is redundant, and would be more powerful without.
I love this quote:
>>Somehow, I thought that Tolly was no stranger to the technique of lying by telling the strict, literal truth.
Mine was "I considered what 'collapsing in a heap' would look like in the seduction dress, and shuddered."
I suppose it's hard to be seductive when you can't walk straight and collapse to the floor.