Well, the current book ends *right* after the wedding, and the next one begins immediately after that. So you haven't read it all yet. (The next book is when they go after the villain).
I have an issue in that it keeps wanting more details, as in what Tolly is thinking. Sorry, none of the scenes are from Tolly's viewpoint, and the characters are not knowingly telepathic. I'm thinking it wants more scenes than that in the Prologue fleshed out. I will at least consider the changes. But I'm not going to just change things based on what Chat GPT thinks it wants.
Very interesting!
Um.. Chatgpt's suggestions change the tone of the book, as we've read it so far.
I thought you had given some of glorina's background... She's on the run/escaping from her previous master, who tortured her.
I know we haven't read about the wedding rituals, because I would have remembered those.
What do you think about the suggested changes?
Well, the current book ends *right* after the wedding, and the next one begins immediately after that. So you haven't read it all yet. (The next book is when they go after the villain).
I have an issue in that it keeps wanting more details, as in what Tolly is thinking. Sorry, none of the scenes are from Tolly's viewpoint, and the characters are not knowingly telepathic. I'm thinking it wants more scenes than that in the Prologue fleshed out. I will at least consider the changes. But I'm not going to just change things based on what Chat GPT thinks it wants.